Compare and Contrast -Peer Edited Draft

Learning Target(s):

  • Analyze how First Peoples languages and texts reflect their cultures, knowledge,
    histories, and worldviews
  • Appreciate and understand how language constructs and reflects personal, social,
    and cultural identities
  • Use writing and design processes to plan, develop, and create engaging and meaningful texts for a variety of purposes and audiences
  • Respond to text in personal, creative, and critical ways
  • Assess and refine texts to improve clarity, effectiveness, and impact
  • Experiment with genres, forms, or styles of texts
  • Use the conventions of First Peoples and other Canadian spelling, syntax, and diction proficiently and as appropriate to the context
  • Transform ideas and information to create original texts, using various genres, forms, structures, and styles

For the Peer Edited Draft Assignment, try to find a peer from the class to edit your first draft - perhaps you can exchange editing services. Failing that, you will need to find a friend, teacher, or another adult to do the peer edit. Contact your teacher if you have any concerns.

For the Peer Edited Draft, your peer will need to follow the instructions on the worksheet and provide a paragraph explanation/ comments on the draft. This worksheet needs to be handed in with the first draft.

Peer editing Workshop Worksheet

To Do:

You need to hand in the marked-up draft and the worksheet as two separate documents. You can scan in the marked-up draft or upload pictures. I need to see evidence of collaboration on the document.

This is where you will upload your assignment to your teacher for marking. 

You will upload the file containing your assignment.  

Name the file with your name and the title.  eg. Sally Brown Infographic Response

    • Click Add submission.

    • The Online Text box is used for brief comments or to paste your link to a shareable document. If you are using google docs, please select 'get shareable link' and then 'anyone with link can edit' and then 'copy link'. Use the chain icon in the online text box to create a hyperlink. Do not use the online text box to paste your whole assignment. 

    • Or, upload the file containing your assignment under File submission. 

    • Click Save changes.