5.3 Elements of Persuasion - Strong Position

Strong Position

Persuasive writing takes a strong stand. The message is clear.

Read the following statements. Do they sound very persuasive?

“Well, it may possibly be a good idea to buy Fluffy Flakes. I hear some pets like them, but then some pets don’t.”

“If you could vote for me for class president, I think it perhaps will work out. I think I might do an okay job.”

“Maybe you should buy this bike. I don’t know too much about this model. The wheels look like they work.”

These statements sound weak and wishy-washy. They are not very convincing.