5.13 Writing Your Script
Revising
Revising is when you look at the content and ask the following questions:
Where will transitions make my script flow better?
Is it in the right order?
Did you say everything you wanted to say?
Did you say everything you need to say? **Check the marking breakdown to make sure you have everything you need in your writing.**
Is the information relevant? Do you need more details?
Did I use consistent verb tenses?
What can I add, delete, substitute, or replace to improve my writing?
Add, delete, substitute/replace, or move things as needed.
Click here to review the revised example from your Descriptive Text Unit.