ELA5, CSS, Sferrazza

Use the common or proper noun in the first instance, before you use a pronoun in your descriptive writing.

Example: Ahmed won an award for his nature photographs. He beamed with excitement as he walked up to the stage.

Pronoun as Subject	Pronoun as Object	Possessive Pronoun	Reflexive Pronoun
I	me	mine	myself
you (singular)	you	yours	yourself
she	her	hers	herself
he	him	his	himself
it	it	its	itself
we	us	ours	ourselves
you (plural)	you	yours	yourselves
they	them	theirs	themselves

Know what pronouns are and keep track of how many you use. Combine sentences if you notice a repeat of pronouns.

Example: Her name is Taina. She has black hair. She has brown eyes. She has a ponytail.

Try instead...

Taina has brown eyes, and black hair in a ponytail.