ELA8, CSS, Sferrazza

Revision is where your writing is taken to the next step.

 Your teacher has given you feedback on one or more items to revise in your writing. You will find those items in the feedback section of your Descriptive Draft assignment. 

Return to your first draft to revise based on those comments and any other revisions you might want to make. This is an important part of the writing process and you will be marked on whether or not you were able to make the necessary revisions.

Your next step is to proofread and edit your piece.