3.5 Oreo Paragraph
To See Again
RE = again VISE = to see
By seeing your writing again, you can make it better! Look at your words to see where you can do the following to improve your writing:
1. Add
2. Subtract
3. Move
4. Change
Ask yourself:
– Are my ideas in a logical order?
– Does everything make sense?
– Have I done everything I can to say things well?
– Have I chosen the best words?
– Do I have well-crafted sentences?
– Do I start with a delicious introduction for a topic sentence? Do I attempt to engage the reader with an interesting and clear topic sentence?
– Check over your rich creamy filling. Do I have clear supporting details and include examples or evidence from the text?
– Have I put in enough interesting details and used evidence from the text?
– How well does my final chocolatey crunch or a clincher sentence restate the main idea in a powerful new way?