5.9 Revised/Edited Draft of Letter

Turn in  your revised/edited draft here.

Remember, your teacher expects to see your edits and revisions as this is not yet your final copy.  Your teacher may give you some feedback that you can use to improve your final copy. It is best NOT to hand in your final copy before getting feedback here first. Your teacher is looking for:

Salutation and complimentary close (appropriate, proper capitals, and commas) 

Friendly, appealing introductory sentence 

Having at least three points/claims with convincing details to support them and clear appeal to heart 

Proper capitals, usage, punctuation, spelling