5.13 Revised/Edited Draft of Script
Turn in your revised/edited draft here.
Remember, your teacher expects to see your edits and revisions as this is not yet your final copy. Your teacher may give you some feedback that you can use to improve your final copy. It is best NOT to hand in your final copy before getting feedback here first. Your teacher is looking for the following elements in a well-revised and edited script.
1. Address your specific target audience (Dear Parents, Kids!)
2. Have a hook sentence that draws your audience in. It can be a question, a short story, scenario or interesting statement
3. State your position (You need to buy this awesome cereal because...then include its special properties.)
4. Use persuasive language and techniques to sell your cereal
- Remember vivid verbs and active adjectives
- Have convincing reasons for people to buy your cereal
- Share the benefits for your audience
5. Tie in the book to your cereal, explain the connection, and/or use a quote from the book.
6. Highlight the prize in the box.
7. Conclude by restating your position.