4.3 Writer's Workshop - Spoken Word Poem and Critical Thinking Essay

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Writer's Notebook 1: Can Poetry (Music) Change the World?

Writer's Notebook 1 Continued... Young Artists for Haiti

YOUNG ARTISTS FOR HAITI

25 years later, in 2010, 57 young Canadian artists recorded a version of “Wavin’ Flag” (originally used as a theme for FIFA World Cup Soccer) to help support relief efforts in Haiti, a country that was devastated by a massive earthquake.  Have you heard of Justin Bieber? Drake? Nelly Furtado? Avril Lavigne?  Michael Buble? The Canadian Tenors? These are only a few of the artists involved.  

This group of young artists gathered around the same time as the 2010 Olympics in Vancouver and the song was recorded in Vancouver. The song was released on March 12, 2010, and by the end of April, it had already raised over one million dollars, with almost 200 000 copies sold on iTunes.

Here are some of the lyrics. Read them out loud to get the gist of the lyrics. While you are reading it, imagine you are in the aftermath of a massive earthquake in a very poor country. Here are a few vocabulary words that will help you to understand the lyrics:

  • carnage - death
  • wretched - very sad or unfortunate state

LYRICS:

When I get older
I will be stronger
They'll call me freedom
Just like a wavin flag

Out of the darkness
in came the carnage 
threatening my very survival
Fractured my streets
and broke all my dreams
now feels like defeat to wretched retreat

So we strugglin'
Fighting to eat
And we wonderin'
If we'll be free
We cannot wait for some faithful day
it's too far away so right now I'll say

When I get older
I will be stronger
They'll call me freedom
Just like a waving flag

                                                    

                                               




Where is Haiti? Haiti is part of an island that is between North and South America. It is south of Florida in the United States and it is east of Mexico.

Listen to the song. When you watch the video, please do not go to the donations link given at the end.  The link is from 2010. Are you a Justin Bieber fan? The boy in the purple shirt near the end of the song is a younger Justin Bieber. If you listen to pop music, you may have heard of this famous Canadian singer and songwriter.

Think:

  • What is the theme of the song?
  • What is the mood of the song?

 Open your Writer's Notebook and complete responses for this song. Then return to the lesson.